So, before the film is released and potentially poos all over this scene, I thought i should have a stab (no pun...) at that seminal H/D canon moment, the infamous sectumsempra bathroom scene.

I feel a certain absence of an element between panels two and three. In a way I would have liked perhaps a snarl or something to indicate that exchange between "Crucio" and "Sectumsempra". But then again, I like the simplicity and balance of three images and the Draco-centric aspect certainly isn't going to cause ME any sleepless nights.

I think what I'd really like is an audio track of the exchange ending in the cry. Hey, once the film is out, perhap one day I could capture a sound file and make an animated slide show of image one, image two, then black and the sound clip and then whatever cry there is and image 3?